A drop of blood dripped from the edge of his sword, hitting the ground hard producing a sound that sounded ten times louder due to the silence of the forest. He’d cornered the woman he’d been assigned to but she did not tremble nor flinch. Instead her gaze steadily held his as she waited for the inevitable. Her body began to glow, illuminating the pure darkness of the night surrounding them, and small red crystals rose from her skin, taking flight. Red streaks pierced the darkness in all directions as each crystal sought an escape from the endless expanse of trees. The man simply smirked.
He held his sword high and pierced her flesh slowly and accurately, finishing the grim task he had been given. The woman made no cry, her expression never cracked as she left this world she had been cursed to live in for centuries. Blood gushed from the wound and soaked through the ground as her now limp body fell among the leaves with a silent thud. The bright red crystals dropped immediately to the ground and their light slowly faded away like the dying embers from a flame.
Slowly, with extreme care and precision he outlined her face with his sword, lifting the skin delicately and tossing it aside once fully detached from the body. Both eyes were removed just as the skin had been and behind each eye he found two small dark purple stones. As he reached for them the dark surroundings illuminated once again, and while he implanted the purple stones within his own eyes, his body was struck from all sides and thirty-three crystals punctured his body. Fresh blood oozed from each hole and this liquid connected each dot in turn creating the sacred pattern. Just then the skies opened up, releasing a cool rain upon the Earth. These drops of pure liquid diluted the blood of the woman, forcing it to separate then sink into the Earth at multiple points, purifying the planet. The newly formed wind whistled through the trees, creating soft music only audible in complete silence. Each air current a whisper of what was being lost.
Well, time to peace out tonight, gonna finish my homework then off to bed for me. 2.5 hours of sleep gave me a headache all day today and my body aches at this point. I'm sure it'll just take some getting used to but I'll be able to withstand this for the rest of the month. Wish me luck, and I wish you all luck too! Happy typing!
~Talathiel
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1 comment:
That was... I had shivers running down my spine. Just descriptive enough to get the point across, but still vague enough to leave things up to the imagination. I loved it!
So, you asked for help, but I have a few questions. What in the world, exactly, is your novel about...? Like, is it going to be centered around all of those crystals, or more around the people who are 'using' the crystals, or maybe even people who are trying to stop the people who are 'using' the crystals? Because you could run in so many different directions with that! I don't want to ramble about the different possibilities, because that would just take up a lot of space, I think, but if you care to hear them, don't hesitate to reach me, cause now my mind is running wild. ^_^ Happy writing!
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